Discussion on Alan's News!

Writer: Alan (karikan Kytori)

Reviewer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Editor: Dana (Nada Copperfield)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

***This discussion is also posted on Alan's blog as feedback.

P.S. Due to the fact that we discussed all 4 stories till 8 p.m. on Wednesday, we had another edition on Alan’s story again on Friday morning. I conclude what we find out this morning in the following suggestion. (In fact, we really do think Alan’s story is too good to revise. But later we find this morning that there are still some problems. Perhaps we all get tired o Wednesday after staying in SL for 6 hours…lol)

Report of Discussion:

The writer’s story is about a working place in Nipponbashi in SL. People who work here are like animals in the farms pushing against that wheel to grind. The author thinks that people circling around the huge log again and again is like an endlessly routine life which many fear in real life. We think that the author has an interesting relation to a routine life in RL. Yet, perhaps the author should make the relation much clearer. He could elaborate on the second paragraph to foreshadow that the routine work in Nipponbashi in SL is like the routine life in RL. What’s more, it’s interesting that people in SL rush here to get a routine work while most people hate this kind of work in RL. Perhaps the author should also work on the third paragraph to dwell on the point he is trying to make. Lastly, perhaps Alan could introduce the job first in the first paragraph instead of the second in order to make a transition.

Here is a little grammatical problem:
There might be quite a lot places to make money, and I happen to come to an interesting place where one could obtain some free Lindens through one’s own labor.
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There might be quite a lot places to make money; and I happen to come to an interesting place where one could obtain some free Lindens through one’s own labor.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:

[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: so u all select ur roles already?
[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: then i'm going to start
[2009/04/15 3:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: viewer
[2009/04/15 3:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: i am so tired
[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: http://britbiscuits.blogspot.com/
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: my story is about this place where u could earn money
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: as u just see
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: it's not quick money, but many people still come here
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: in my 1st para, i wrote about manu people would like to know how to earn money
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: then i introduce this place
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: and how to earn Lindens
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: just push against that wheel
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: then i talked about why i feel interested in this place
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: coz the camping makes people look like animals
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: cattles or horses in the farm'
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: at last i wrote about my own reflection about this palce and the job
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: it's like an endlessly routine life
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: and that's what many people fear in real life
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: that's it
[2009/04/15 4:02] Cloud Clarity: k wait
[2009/04/15 4:03] Cloud Clarity: so gooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:03] Cloud Clarity: hahah
[2009/04/15 4:03] Nada Copperfield: goooood
[2009/04/15 4:03] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:04] Jackowacko Juliesse: goooooood
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: LOL
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: SERIOUS
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: WE ARE
[2009/04/15 4:04] Nada Copperfield: goooooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:04] Nada Copperfield: we are serious
[2009/04/15 4:05] Cloud Clarity: LOL
[2009/04/15 4:06] Nada Copperfield: organizer remembers to take pic
[2009/04/15 4:06] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: alan
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: yes?
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: i think you article is nearly perfect
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: don't say that
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: i think emma would not think so
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:07] Cloud Clarity: reallymmmmmmm
[2009/04/15 4:07] Cloud Clarity: that me seee
[2009/04/15 4:09] Nada Copperfield: yes>
[2009/04/15 4:09] Nada Copperfield: I AM READING
[2009/04/15 4:12] karikan Kytori: what? done?
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: i finish
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: rightnow
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: is a gooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: time
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: i like yoour third paragraph
[2009/04/15 4:13] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/04/15 4:14] karikan Kytori: more opinions on my work?
[2009/04/15 4:15] karikan Kytori: who's my organiser?
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: here
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: gosh
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: i am reading ur wordk
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: i am trying to read and read nad read agiain and agina
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: k
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: too serious
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: i read= ="
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: well.....
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: it is goood
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: jason
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: maybe
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: what's ur opinion?
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: you can put what is the job in the first paragraph
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: that is all i can think of
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: sorruy
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: make the wheel more clear
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: i really think its' great
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: the metioning of the job or somehting
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: right?
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: if i have other opinion
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: i wll teel u
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: i'll think of ot
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: in private
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: it
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: in msn
[2009/04/15 4:18] karikan Kytori: ok

Unexpectedly Meeting

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A crazy American DJ with a microphone!

Never expected to meet a real DJ in Second Life? Here let me introduce you Michael Skosh, a crazy American DJ as well as a SL mentor!

I accidentally met him when I joined a club party. Music there is playing as usual; but suddenly I noticed that there is something different. At the interval of different songs I heard a soft, charming and steady voice coming out of my earphones. His voice is so professional that I first thought that it was playing by radio. However, I found out later that it was NOT from a radio. It was the DJ who was talking to us! And what’s more, he was once a real DJ in 80’s in the US!

Michael really enjoys being a DJ. While talking to me, he was sitting in front of his computer, monitoring it and introducing songs to the whole clubs. His voice makes the SL much real. It is just like listening to radios where you might have a chance to order songs you like. His amusing introduction of each song makes people laugh and build up an excited atmosphere for the SL club. Dancing in SL no longer bores me since I cannot only watch the system activated my avatar but also expect to listen to more interesting addressing for each song!

What Is Under The Tents?

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A way to show Taiwanese hospitality.

Banzhuo is a Taiwanese expression, which refers to outdoor, or street-side catered banquets held in large tents. Whenever festivals, wedding occasions, political events arrive, tents would appear in streets and alleys especially in the central and southern parts of Taiwan. The larger scale of Banzhuo might serve hundreds people. Some passionate as well as wealthy hosts would also invite passers-by to join the feast. After settling down all tables, cooks would serve dishes one after another. Any guest could feel free to come and go; therefore, we call this kind of Banzhuo “open-air banquet.”

Open-air banquet usually appears when there is a temple fair. Take Dajia Mazu Pilgrimage for example. It is the biggest event of the year for Mazu’s believers, which is held around Aperil. More than 100 thousand followers from all around Taiwan organize a huge pilgrimage group, marching more than 300 kilometers on foot to Feng Tien Palace in Hsin Kang and return to Dajia Mazu Temple. Some believers who do not follow the pilgrimage stay in their hometown and hold open-air banquets all along the way to Hsin Kang, providing a shed for followers to eat and rest. Meanwhile, they hope their family who take part in the pilgrimage could also find sheds to take a rest and enjoy good food in other counties.

Although cuisines in open-air banquet would not be the best, they are cooked by believers with their best dishes! Every dish is filled with warm and sincere; and their hospitality does play a crucial role in Taiwan’s eating culture. Taiwanese eat not only food but also the atmosphere around when eating. The culture of Banzhuo is all about eating the “atmosphere.” It is really time for family and friends to gather together as well as for visitors or passers-by to feel the warms from Taiwanese!

Welcome to Bamboo Town!(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's TaKeng Scenic Area

Daken is one of the most important recreational and tourist areas in Taichung. Residents and non-local people alike love to visit Daken not only for hiking but for delicacies from Daken!

Driving along Dong Shan Road, you will meet a round fork where delicious food is all around. Among all delicacies, the most famous one is cuisine cooking with bamboo. Here we have a time-honored restaurant with well-cooked Bamboo cuisines. Let me introduce you to Bamboo Town, the well-known restaurant in Daken.

Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Daken in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. It is quite different from the electric steaming rice for the bamboo makes it smell like we are in the bamboo forests. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

Welcome to Bamboo Town!
If you want to enjoy delicious bamboo cuisines, welcome to Taichung where bamboo flourishes. Many media has reported about bamboo cuisines around Daken, especially about Bamboo Town, the time-honored restaurant! Sitting in the restaurant, you will find many signature form celebrity and media. Give it a chance for your palate! You will fall in love with it!

Discussion on Jason's News!

**The following discussion, summary and adivce will be posted on Jason's blog as feedback.

Writer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Reviewer: Dana (Nada Copperfield)

Editor: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

Report on the Discussion:

Jason’s story is about famous Eva puff in Tainan which is renowned for its ice cream stuff with eight flavors. Our group members are really amazed by the pictures that Jason took. These pictures really grab readers’ attentions even before we read it! It is a good start to make an attraction. Yet, in his article, what we concerned about is that there is a strange leap in the second paragraph: “But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.” Here we find no transition between these two sentences. We even don’t know which blog he is mentioned. So we suggest him that he should revise that part like adding a transition. As readers, we want to know why he should mention the blog. Does it has anything to do with Eva’s celebrity? That’s what we want to know about and is very crucial in making the whole story complete.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:
[2009/03/25 1:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: next~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:14] Fiona Galaxy is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:14] Makong Broono is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: who's next= =
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: me?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: writer?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 1:15] karikan Kytori: ok, then i'm evaluator
[2009/03/25 1:15] Nada Copperfield: i am the reviwer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: organizer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: my story is talking about the EVA puff
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is special in taiwan
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: link~~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: please
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: so sweet
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: 中文是啥？eva?
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: olivia is yelling behin me = =
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: someday saves her please
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: but the pic is so delicious~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: she is crazier than me
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: 依娃
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohohoh
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: you are a professional potoghoprraoger
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: yes u r
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: so delicious
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: hey jacko
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: i wanna eat that
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: i want to eat
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: bring it ot me please
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: it's ice cream
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: me too
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: i cannot take here
[2009/03/25 1:19] Nada Copperfield: i know
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: NCKU?
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: 成功？
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:20] karikan Kytori: what do u mean by "based on the article on the blog?"
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: based on the article on the blog? of the blog
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: i spell the wrong word
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: hey jason i thkin there is something that might be wrong
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes?
[2009/03/25 1:21] karikan Kytori: u mean the blog of yhe shop?
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: some blogger
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: i eman the nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: is it a litte wierd
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: the morphology?
[2009/03/25 1:22] Cloud Clarity: ｓｏ　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ｂｌｏｇ？
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: or lemonellen?
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: u mean my morphology
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: what is bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: well i am not talling about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: i am talking the lines
[2009/03/25 1:23] karikan Kytori: there are some grammatical errors to be corrected in ur revision
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: danke
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: it's not big deal ~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: but the blog......
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste.
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: the sentence?
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: yes the sentence
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i dunno what you guyes are talking about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i am fine with it so far
[2009/03/25 1:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is not a big deal
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz olivian asked me
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: which blog= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: uhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:26] Nada Copperfield: hayah you still need to correct it muahuahuahua
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: it's cuz alan ask first= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:26] karikan Kytori: what i mean is not about which blog
[2009/03/25 1:27] karikan Kytori: i mean why u mentioned others' blogs in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:27] Cloud Clarity: ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: i saw it
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: what blog did you mean>
[2009/03/25 1:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz it really tasted by others
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog online
[2009/03/25 1:28] Nada Copperfield: or you just told them, if it is so haha ignore me
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: should i revise these part
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: about which blog?
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: it;s not clear
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: i see that part in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's abrupt to see this
[2009/03/25 1:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i should emphsize on which i blog i quote from?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's better if u add that
[2009/03/25 1:30] karikan Kytori: so u want to gain some guarantee from others' blogs?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: extraodinary?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: the extrodianry
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: should you add the extraodianry of what or it is okay
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: haha i dunno quite sure
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: i want to gurantee the flavor is really good
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: haha i know i mean
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i quote from the blog called bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:32] karikan Kytori: i know why i felt weird
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: ??
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: the extraodinary is enoguh or you should add "the extraodinayr of waht'
[2009/03/25 1:33] karikan Kytori: coz the former sentence goes that milk sold the best
[2009/03/25 1:33] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i c
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: unrelatted?
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant. But before you ready to savor the puff, you should wait for a while until the ice cream becomes a little bit of softness.
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: these part?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i also feel something weird\
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/25 1:34] Nada Copperfield: jump too fast?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i would revise the sentece
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: it's unclear enough
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: Get lost!
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: why u r so silent?
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: i asked how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: i'm wondering
[2009/03/25 1:38] Nada Copperfield: Please!
[2009/03/25 1:39] Nada Copperfield: is it becasuee it is a litte bit abpurt that you jump from milk than to the blogger?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Tash Sobczak: y
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: to the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: is that so?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: haha \
[2009/03/25 1:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: i only quote from the blog
[2009/03/25 1:40] Cloud Clarity: i think if u want to say about blogger, u perhaps should give the link?
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Zoey Itano: ?
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o totally and finally completely ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:41] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz i want everyone to realize what the flavor is the best-selling
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i think the reason u quoted from the blogs is not clear
[2009/03/25 1:42] Nada Copperfield: that is what the blogger said??
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i do not understand what u want to focus on when i first read it
[2009/03/25 1:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i do not understand what u want to focus
[2009/03/25 1:43] Nada Copperfield: oh then you choose the wron the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i dunno what the meaning of alan said
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: dana
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: u r dancing?
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: i know why. coz u divide them into two sentences
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: so i think u r talking about two different things
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: she's b;azing
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: HOOOOOOHOOOOOHOOOOO
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: Hoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: nein
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = = \\\\
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/25 1:46] Cloud Clarity: do u know what we are talking about jacko?
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: i still think these two sentences are irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: = = haha
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: this blogger is ........ not understandable
[2009/03/25 1:46] karikan Kytori: maybe dana could explain it
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: uh.....
[2009/03/25 1:47] karikan Kytori: i don't know how to explain my feeling
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u sould paraphrase
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: okay what i think is that
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: like according to the blog byjenny...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: the blogger mentioned that...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: sort of
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: first the blogger is talking about the best thing of this store, then she said we should wait for the ice cream Blahblahblah
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: so what i think is that are they relevant???= =
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: i dunno
[2009/03/25 1:48] Cloud Clarity: or u need a transition
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will revise
[2009/03/25 1:49] Cloud Clarity: at least u should say why you quote the blog or why this blog so importatnt
[2009/03/25 1:49] Nada Copperfield: is that so ALAn????? or what you concerned of is another thinng
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: this is not only one said like bajenny said
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: i agree with u
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: many ppl said about this
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: u sould emphasis at first not until the third paragraph did the sentence show up
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: oh
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: so perhaps u should not quot?
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: that's why i did not link to the linkinh
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: calm down
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: crazy woman
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: stop her jacko
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: or
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: follow her
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: XDDDDDDD
[2009/03/25 1:51] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: what;s wrong
[2009/03/25 1:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one is crazyyyyyyyyyyyy
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: mensch what is going on
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: HAHAHAHAH
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: go back everyon
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: e
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: what should we do
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: jacko needs help muahaha
[2009/03/25 1:53] Una Rewell is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: i know the question of the article
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: do you mean that could should mention the blog first?
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: ook
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: jacko should .......
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: typo = =
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: \
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sh*
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: don't just jump into "the blog"
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: we reader don't knok what's that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: and what's so important about this quot
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i still put on the linking?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Amberlin Zuta is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: but it not only this blog said like that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: no need for the link
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: i think
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: coz u said many people buy EVA because of the blog?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dand ...
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one who taste the ouff
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: fall
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: s
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: has the same feeling like the blig
[2009/03/25 1:56] karikan Kytori: dana becomes nada now
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dana is stuck downstair muahhaa
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: so ?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u can ssay...
[2009/03/25 1:58] karikan Kytori: do not trip on me, obasan
[2009/03/25 1:58] Jackowacko Juliesse: transition?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: tranisition
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: ha yeah@@
[2009/03/25 1:59] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:59] Cloud Clarity: okay

Welcome to Bamboo Town!

Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's Ta-Keng Scenic Zone


Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Takeng in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

What can pieces of bread satisfy a glutton?(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A simple composition brings you a fresh aspect.

Whenever it comes to palatable food, has it ever occurred to you that sandwiches could also be named in the-food-you-must-eat list? Here in Taichung Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary offer you an opportunity to experience different savor of sandwich!

Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary is located on Ziyou Road opposite Taiwan Taichung District Court. It is a time-honored shop founded in 1946. Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary has long held a reputation for its famous delicacies especially its renowned advertisement sandwich!

This delicious sandwich is disguised with a plain look; however, as long as you take a bite, you will discover its delectableness. Disclosing each layer, ham and omelet with special-made Mayonnaise reveal before your eyes. Do not belittle this unattractive composition. It is this simple composition makes the sandwich amazingly tasty and refreshing. Even if it is a little expensive for NT$25 per advertisement sandwich, it is still worth a try. The sandwich is not grease even though it contains Mayonnaise; this special-mixed dressing plays a crucial role in providing pleasant to our palate. Moreover, it can serve as a desert for an afternoon tea. Fans of Hong Rui-Zhen advertisement sandwich always line up for a pile of boxes (10~12 sandwiches per box). Every customer just can’t wait to enjoy sandwiches and finishes two or three within minutes.

Next Magazine once honored the sandwich to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Although it is a little exaggerated to be the “best”, it still can be listed at top 10. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches. If you do bother to go to Taichung for a try, just post your wishes there; groups of people will be glad to join you to order sandwiches and share the delivery fees.

Just give it a try! You may fall in love with it!