Welcome to Bamboo Town!(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's TaKeng Scenic Area

Daken is one of the most important recreational and tourist areas in Taichung. Residents and non-local people alike love to visit Daken not only for hiking but for delicacies from Daken!

Driving along Dong Shan Road, you will meet a round fork where delicious food is all around. Among all delicacies, the most famous one is cuisine cooking with bamboo. Here we have a time-honored restaurant with well-cooked Bamboo cuisines. Let me introduce you to Bamboo Town, the well-known restaurant in Daken.

Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Daken in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. It is quite different from the electric steaming rice for the bamboo makes it smell like we are in the bamboo forests. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

Welcome to Bamboo Town!
If you want to enjoy delicious bamboo cuisines, welcome to Taichung where bamboo flourishes. Many media has reported about bamboo cuisines around Daken, especially about Bamboo Town, the time-honored restaurant! Sitting in the restaurant, you will find many signature form celebrity and media. Give it a chance for your palate! You will fall in love with it!

Discussion on Jason's News!

**The following discussion, summary and adivce will be posted on Jason's blog as feedback.

Writer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Reviewer: Dana (Nada Copperfield)

Editor: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

Report on the Discussion:

Jason’s story is about famous Eva puff in Tainan which is renowned for its ice cream stuff with eight flavors. Our group members are really amazed by the pictures that Jason took. These pictures really grab readers’ attentions even before we read it! It is a good start to make an attraction. Yet, in his article, what we concerned about is that there is a strange leap in the second paragraph: “But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.” Here we find no transition between these two sentences. We even don’t know which blog he is mentioned. So we suggest him that he should revise that part like adding a transition. As readers, we want to know why he should mention the blog. Does it has anything to do with Eva’s celebrity? That’s what we want to know about and is very crucial in making the whole story complete.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:
[2009/03/25 1:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: next~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:14] Fiona Galaxy is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:14] Makong Broono is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: who's next= =
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: me?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: writer?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 1:15] karikan Kytori: ok, then i'm evaluator
[2009/03/25 1:15] Nada Copperfield: i am the reviwer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: organizer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: my story is talking about the EVA puff
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is special in taiwan
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: link~~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: please
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: so sweet
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: 中文是啥？eva?
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: olivia is yelling behin me = =
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: someday saves her please
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: but the pic is so delicious~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: she is crazier than me
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: 依娃
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohohoh
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: you are a professional potoghoprraoger
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: yes u r
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: so delicious
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: hey jacko
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: i wanna eat that
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: i want to eat
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: bring it ot me please
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: it's ice cream
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: me too
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: i cannot take here
[2009/03/25 1:19] Nada Copperfield: i know
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: NCKU?
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: 成功？
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:20] karikan Kytori: what do u mean by "based on the article on the blog?"
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: based on the article on the blog? of the blog
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: i spell the wrong word
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: hey jason i thkin there is something that might be wrong
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes?
[2009/03/25 1:21] karikan Kytori: u mean the blog of yhe shop?
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: some blogger
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: i eman the nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: is it a litte wierd
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: the morphology?
[2009/03/25 1:22] Cloud Clarity: ｓｏ　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ｂｌｏｇ？
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: or lemonellen?
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: u mean my morphology
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: what is bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: well i am not talling about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: i am talking the lines
[2009/03/25 1:23] karikan Kytori: there are some grammatical errors to be corrected in ur revision
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: danke
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: it's not big deal ~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: but the blog......
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste.
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: the sentence?
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: yes the sentence
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i dunno what you guyes are talking about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i am fine with it so far
[2009/03/25 1:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is not a big deal
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz olivian asked me
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: which blog= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: uhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:26] Nada Copperfield: hayah you still need to correct it muahuahuahua
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: it's cuz alan ask first= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:26] karikan Kytori: what i mean is not about which blog
[2009/03/25 1:27] karikan Kytori: i mean why u mentioned others' blogs in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:27] Cloud Clarity: ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: i saw it
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: what blog did you mean>
[2009/03/25 1:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz it really tasted by others
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog online
[2009/03/25 1:28] Nada Copperfield: or you just told them, if it is so haha ignore me
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: should i revise these part
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: about which blog?
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: it;s not clear
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: i see that part in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's abrupt to see this
[2009/03/25 1:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i should emphsize on which i blog i quote from?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's better if u add that
[2009/03/25 1:30] karikan Kytori: so u want to gain some guarantee from others' blogs?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: extraodinary?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: the extrodianry
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: should you add the extraodianry of what or it is okay
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: haha i dunno quite sure
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: i want to gurantee the flavor is really good
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: haha i know i mean
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i quote from the blog called bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:32] karikan Kytori: i know why i felt weird
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: ??
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: the extraodinary is enoguh or you should add "the extraodinayr of waht'
[2009/03/25 1:33] karikan Kytori: coz the former sentence goes that milk sold the best
[2009/03/25 1:33] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i c
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: unrelatted?
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant. But before you ready to savor the puff, you should wait for a while until the ice cream becomes a little bit of softness.
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: these part?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i also feel something weird\
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/25 1:34] Nada Copperfield: jump too fast?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i would revise the sentece
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: it's unclear enough
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: Get lost!
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: why u r so silent?
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: i asked how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: i'm wondering
[2009/03/25 1:38] Nada Copperfield: Please!
[2009/03/25 1:39] Nada Copperfield: is it becasuee it is a litte bit abpurt that you jump from milk than to the blogger?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Tash Sobczak: y
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: to the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: is that so?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: haha \
[2009/03/25 1:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: i only quote from the blog
[2009/03/25 1:40] Cloud Clarity: i think if u want to say about blogger, u perhaps should give the link?
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Zoey Itano: ?
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o totally and finally completely ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:41] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz i want everyone to realize what the flavor is the best-selling
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i think the reason u quoted from the blogs is not clear
[2009/03/25 1:42] Nada Copperfield: that is what the blogger said??
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i do not understand what u want to focus on when i first read it
[2009/03/25 1:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i do not understand what u want to focus
[2009/03/25 1:43] Nada Copperfield: oh then you choose the wron the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i dunno what the meaning of alan said
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: dana
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: u r dancing?
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: i know why. coz u divide them into two sentences
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: so i think u r talking about two different things
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: she's b;azing
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: HOOOOOOHOOOOOHOOOOO
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: Hoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: nein
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = = \\\\
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/25 1:46] Cloud Clarity: do u know what we are talking about jacko?
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: i still think these two sentences are irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: = = haha
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: this blogger is ........ not understandable
[2009/03/25 1:46] karikan Kytori: maybe dana could explain it
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: uh.....
[2009/03/25 1:47] karikan Kytori: i don't know how to explain my feeling
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u sould paraphrase
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: okay what i think is that
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: like according to the blog byjenny...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: the blogger mentioned that...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: sort of
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: first the blogger is talking about the best thing of this store, then she said we should wait for the ice cream Blahblahblah
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: so what i think is that are they relevant???= =
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: i dunno
[2009/03/25 1:48] Cloud Clarity: or u need a transition
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will revise
[2009/03/25 1:49] Cloud Clarity: at least u should say why you quote the blog or why this blog so importatnt
[2009/03/25 1:49] Nada Copperfield: is that so ALAn????? or what you concerned of is another thinng
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: this is not only one said like bajenny said
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: i agree with u
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: many ppl said about this
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: u sould emphasis at first not until the third paragraph did the sentence show up
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: oh
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: so perhaps u should not quot?
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: that's why i did not link to the linkinh
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: calm down
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: crazy woman
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: stop her jacko
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: or
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: follow her
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: XDDDDDDD
[2009/03/25 1:51] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: what;s wrong
[2009/03/25 1:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one is crazyyyyyyyyyyyy
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: mensch what is going on
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: HAHAHAHAH
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: go back everyon
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: e
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: what should we do
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: jacko needs help muahaha
[2009/03/25 1:53] Una Rewell is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: i know the question of the article
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: do you mean that could should mention the blog first?
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: ook
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: jacko should .......
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: typo = =
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: \
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sh*
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: don't just jump into "the blog"
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: we reader don't knok what's that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: and what's so important about this quot
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i still put on the linking?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Amberlin Zuta is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: but it not only this blog said like that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: no need for the link
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: i think
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: coz u said many people buy EVA because of the blog?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dand ...
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one who taste the ouff
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: fall
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: s
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: has the same feeling like the blig
[2009/03/25 1:56] karikan Kytori: dana becomes nada now
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dana is stuck downstair muahhaa
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: so ?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u can ssay...
[2009/03/25 1:58] karikan Kytori: do not trip on me, obasan
[2009/03/25 1:58] Jackowacko Juliesse: transition?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: tranisition
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: ha yeah@@
[2009/03/25 1:59] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:59] Cloud Clarity: okay

Welcome to Bamboo Town!

Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's Ta-Keng Scenic Zone


Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Takeng in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

What can pieces of bread satisfy a glutton?(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A simple composition brings you a fresh aspect.

Whenever it comes to palatable food, has it ever occurred to you that sandwiches could also be named in the-food-you-must-eat list? Here in Taichung Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary offer you an opportunity to experience different savor of sandwich!

Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary is located on Ziyou Road opposite Taiwan Taichung District Court. It is a time-honored shop founded in 1946. Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary has long held a reputation for its famous delicacies especially its renowned advertisement sandwich!

This delicious sandwich is disguised with a plain look; however, as long as you take a bite, you will discover its delectableness. Disclosing each layer, ham and omelet with special-made Mayonnaise reveal before your eyes. Do not belittle this unattractive composition. It is this simple composition makes the sandwich amazingly tasty and refreshing. Even if it is a little expensive for NT$25 per advertisement sandwich, it is still worth a try. The sandwich is not grease even though it contains Mayonnaise; this special-mixed dressing plays a crucial role in providing pleasant to our palate. Moreover, it can serve as a desert for an afternoon tea. Fans of Hong Rui-Zhen advertisement sandwich always line up for a pile of boxes (10~12 sandwiches per box). Every customer just can’t wait to enjoy sandwiches and finishes two or three within minutes.

Next Magazine once honored the sandwich to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Although it is a little exaggerated to be the “best”, it still can be listed at top 10. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches. If you do bother to go to Taichung for a try, just post your wishes there; groups of people will be glad to join you to order sandwiches and share the delivery fees.

Just give it a try! You may fall in love with it!

Discussion on Alan's News!

Writer: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Reviewer:Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Editor: Dana (Nada Copperfield)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)


Report on the Discussion:

The news is about the special roast chickens in Jiouchiunghu, Sinpu (Hsinchu County). The writer begins the story with the celebrity of the roast chickens which attracts a large number of people to give it a try. Next, he mentions how it is cooked and focuses readers’ attentions on the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens. Then he makes an ending about the way it is served.

All of our group members (editor, reviewer, organizer) think that it is a good piece of work. First, he has a focus on how these chickens are cooked. Second, the comparison between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens provides readers a different aspect to further understand the chickens’ uniqueness. In addition, the ending is quite interesting both by telling readers how you should eat them ( “…just forget your knife and fork at home and simply use your hands to enjoy the meal: It is no time for table manners”) and adding a luring picture of a roast chicken at the end of the story, which gives a hint that “he should say no more but just EAT IT!!”

For the weakness of this news, we find that the comparison has no stark contrast. The writer should elaborate on this part such as: Why is it so special in cooking in a box? Does it make chickens tastier or dose the aroma result from the special cooking method? Besides, some of the sentences need to be revised such as “Some people may well ask what the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens, which are roasted in steel barrels as well, is” which is a little too long and therefore leads to a single word “is” after a comma.
All in all, Alan’s news is pretty good. After reading his story, we all can wait for no time to give it a try!



Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:

[2009/03/11 7:56] Cloud Clarity: i am th organizer of alan's
[2009/03/11 7:56] karikan Kytori: it's dana's sleep time
[2009/03/11 7:56] karikan Kytori: h aha
[2009/03/11 7:56] Nada Copperfield: muahauhauaha
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: iti s
[2009/03/11 7:57] Cloud Clarity: lol
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: muahaua
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: but it's okay
[2009/03/11 7:57] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 7:57] Cloud Clarity: i'm ok if u don't mind~
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: i can endure it
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: so i am the editor of alns; aritlce
[2009/03/11 7:57] karikan Kytori: ha ha, endure
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: muahuahauah
[2009/03/11 7:58] Cloud Clarity: dana wants to sing
[2009/03/11 7:58] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 7:58] karikan Kytori: sing for us
[2009/03/11 7:58] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: can you have your link
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: can i have your link
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: i can not have another clikc another item
[2009/03/11 7:59] karikan Kytori: britbiscuits@blogspot.com
[2009/03/11 7:59] Cloud Clarity: Next Magazine once honored the sandwich of Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Perhaps you might think it’s a little exaggerated; yet, you still cannot deny the facts that the sandwich is at the top. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches.
[2009/03/11 8:00] Cloud Clarity: sory= = \
[2009/03/11 8:00] Cloud Clarity: http://britbiscuits.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: danke
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: i like tyou topic
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:00] karikan Kytori: ok, my story seems to be kinda disorder
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: it's intriguing
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: coz i just wrote what i thought at the time
[2009/03/11 8:01] Cloud Clarity: can u say the chinese name of ur cusines?
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: fisrt, i mentioned it attracts many people to give it a try
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: no name
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: just 烤雞
[2009/03/11 8:02] karikan Kytori: then i mentioned how it is cooked
[2009/03/11 8:02] karikan Kytori: and its aroma
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: then the difference between 桶子雞 and it
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: whic is good
[2009/03/11 8:03] Cloud Clarity: where?
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: at the end, how to taste it
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: then>
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: ??
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: the end.......
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: it seems to me abrupt now
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: your picture is really really good
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: since it is really enticing
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: since u do not get its ending
[2009/03/11 8:04] Cloud Clarity: i like ur last para
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: and that could arous readers' apetite
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: muahauhaua
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: is it not abrupt?
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: wati
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: not that far yet
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: i kept wondering whether i could end thus
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: then your organization is also fine
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: i mean good
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/03/11 8:06] karikan Kytori: shall i elaborate some parts more?
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: the ending is good
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: you dont need to change
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: since it is time for the reader to have the chicken
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: then you sould end here
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: which is also good
[2009/03/11 8:07] karikan Kytori: so it is not abrupt?
[2009/03/11 8:07] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:07] Cloud Clarity: i'm hungry for reading ur news= =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/03/11 8:08] karikan Kytori: ur exaggerating
[2009/03/11 8:08] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/11 8:08] Cloud Clarity: no i am really hungry= =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: the readers should taste the chicken themselves
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: muahuaha or i misread it again
[2009/03/11 8:09] karikan Kytori: u mean i should add this?
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: i dunno
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: becaseu
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: your ending is good for me
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: but then the taste would be missing
[2009/03/11 8:09] Cloud Clarity: yeah me too
[2009/03/11 8:09] Cloud Clarity: i like the ending
[2009/03/11 8:09] karikan Kytori: the taste?
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: i don't get it
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: would u explain it?
[2009/03/11 8:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: really ler me want to taste
[2009/03/11 8:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: let*
[2009/03/11 8:10] Nada Copperfield: becasue savor of this chickin is depend on the reader but not the words
[2009/03/11 8:10] Nada Copperfield: well its a little bit hard to explain
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 8:11] Nada Copperfield: but i dnot; mean that you have to add the discrption of the taste
[2009/03/11 8:11] Nada Copperfield: again , it depends on waht is your main point
[2009/03/11 8:11] Cloud Clarity: can we go next time lol
[2009/03/11 8:12] Cloud Clarity: Some people may well ask what the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens, which are roasted in steel barrels as well, is. ---> why u have "is " at the end?
[2009/03/11 8:12] Nada Copperfield: if your point is just about entice the reader to have a bit of it then you actually don't have to mention the savor
[2009/03/11 8:12] karikan Kytori: the difference
[2009/03/11 8:12] karikan Kytori: singular
[2009/03/11 8:13] Cloud Clarity: yeah i see that wheich is too long to remeber the previous lines@@
[2009/03/11 8:13] Cloud Clarity: sory
[2009/03/11 8:13] Nada Copperfield: if you just want to entice the readers to have the chickne
[2009/03/11 8:13] Nada Copperfield: then i think the ending is enough
[2009/03/11 8:13] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll revise the sentences
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: but i still don't get nada's comment
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: u mean i do not have to compare them?
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: np
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: i thinkg that ur news is mainly about introducing the way of cooking not the flavor
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: just take a look of the pic
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: you can see its delicious
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: ( my feeling= =)
[2009/03/11 8:15] karikan Kytori: so i do not need to describe its taste? like succulent part?
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: yeah
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: maybe
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: not
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: you could mention it
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: that's fine
[2009/03/11 8:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: ur topic is the difference between the way they cooked?
[2009/03/11 8:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: or the flavor between them?
[2009/03/11 8:17] Nada Copperfield: you can focus on the scent then the flavor would be depend on the readers
[2009/03/11 8:17] Nada Copperfield: since the ending is kinda let the reader to taste it tmeselves
[2009/03/11 8:17] karikan Kytori: u mean i just describe how it's served
[2009/03/11 8:18] karikan Kytori: not the taste?
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: no i mean it;s okay not to desvribe the taste that';s fine
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: sicne the readers could taste it themsevles
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: which is the dunction of your ending
[2009/03/11 8:18] Cloud Clarity: i reread again, and i find itss ok to add "taste" part if u want
[2009/03/11 8:19] Nada Copperfield: fucntion
[2009/03/11 8:19] Nada Copperfield: then the scent discription might arouse our evoke the readers or entice the readers to taste them tmeselves
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: but if u don't, i also feel its ok cuz the overall news is about the way it served
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: we have less than ten mins
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: i think you article is no problem
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahuah
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: i think the taste part is the difference, so i wrote it
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: perhaps we should try to make a conclusion?
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: never think of taste and serving way
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: muahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:21] karikan Kytori: olivia, u mean at the end?
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:22] Cloud Clarity: ok just forget about it, i just mean that either u add taste or not is ok
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: the scent
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: the scent is what you can focus on
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: then that would entice the readers to taste the chicken
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: u mean the wooden scent or the hakka part?
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: or more about the scent?
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: the chicken scent
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: muahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: other scents?
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: the chicken scent
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: what other scents
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: spirit's scetns????
[2009/03/11 8:24] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll try to conjure up a possible description about that
[2009/03/11 8:24] Cloud Clarity: hey~do u mention why it is cooked in the box?
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: why it's cooked in the box?
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: but that's just a way to cook
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: since u do not use an electric oven
[2009/03/11 8:25] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: oh
[2009/03/11 8:25] Nada Copperfield: no big problem actually
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: i know ur meaning
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: but the fucntion of the box
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: but i do not know how to say that in eng
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: 要"悶"
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:26] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohoh
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: but i do not know the word for it
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: or make the scent more enticing?????
[2009/03/11 8:26] Una Rewell is Online
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: more thick
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: Hey!
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: thanks
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: i'll add that part'
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: we are done
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: right?????
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: btw i like your picture
[2009/03/11 8:27] Cloud Clarity: cuz the airtight space preserved the aroma
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: it's really goooooooood
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: done sounds like we r in trouble
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuah
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: it''s pun
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: no other opinion?
[2009/03/11 8:28] Cloud Clarity: or cuz the airtight space make it possible to eat( 才會熟)
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: then she else?
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: sth
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: no i guss
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: i think it makes chickens 熟透 and 增加香氣 at the same time
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: u cna try to decribe that if u want to say sth more abnout the box's function
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: so...
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: done?
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll try to look for "悶" in eng
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:30] karikan Kytori: ok, thx

Delicacies in Taichung!! (Part I)

Information:

洪瑞珍餅店自由店Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary on Ziyou Rd:

TEL:(04) 2226-8787

FAX: (04) 2226-8789

Address: 台中市西屯區自由路一段122號 No.122, Sec. 1, Ziyou Rd., West District, Taichung City 403, Taiwan (R.O.C.)

Whenever it comes to palatable food, has it ever occurred to you that sandwich is also part of the tasting list? Here in Taichung Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary offer you an opportunity to experience different savor of sandwich!

Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary is located on Ziyou Road opposite Taiwan Taichung District Court. It is a time-honored shop founded in 1946. Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary has long held a reputation for its famous delicacies like peanut brittle and, of course, its advertisement sandwich!

The delicious sandwich is coated with a plain look; however, as long as you take a bite, you will discover its delectableness. Among each layers between toast, ham or omelet with special-made Mayonnaise appears. Do not belittle this unattractive composition. It is this simple composition makes the sandwich amazingly tasty and refreshing. Even if it is a little expensive for NT$25 per advertisement sandwich, it is still worth a try. The sandwich is not grease though it has Mayonnaise; the Mayonnaise plays a vital role for the sandwich in providing pleasant to the palate. Moreover, it can serve as a desert for an afternoon tea. Fans for Hong Rui-Zhen sandwich always line up for a pile of boxes (10~12 sandwiches per box). Every customer just can’t wait to enjoy sandwiches and finishes two or three within minutes.

Next Magazine once honored the sandwich of Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Perhaps you might think it’s a little exaggerated; yet, you still cannot deny the facts that the sandwich is at the top. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches.

Perhaps you should also give it a try! You may fall in love with it!

Sorry for Deletion of the previous version of Taiwan's story!

Somehow,
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