Progress Report (3)

Results/Findings/Disscussion

According to our surveys, I would like to separate the results in three different aspects: politics between China and Taiwan, travel in Taiwan and Taiwan’s stars. These are three different perspectives in forming impression of Taiwan.

For the part of politics, exchanged students from China state that they usually watched CCTV to receive new information about Taiwan which includes daily news report and featured TV programs, Events Between Straits, from CCTV-4. This channel contains a variety of programs including documentaries, music, news, dramas, sports, and cartoons. Also, it covers news and events in Taiwan, Hong-kong and Chinatown around the world. According to the exchanged students, they would find out more about Taiwan’s politics or events mostly in CCTV-4 by news and Events Between Straits, a political talk show. In the news or other featured programs, the anchors claim that Taiwan is a good place with friendly people and they have freedom or perhaps too much freedom for people to talk. And the anchors from Taiwan in the featured programs, Events Between Straits, 尹乃菁 and 江岷欽 have their live talk show from Taiwan as the program broadcast in China. They would state partially the voices of Taiwan; however, not all of them can truthfully represent us. Nevertheless, they somehow in this way communicate with anchors and audiences in China; and this does help these exchanged students form part of their impression of Taiwan. Among these exchanged students, boys tend to have more interest in concerning about the politics in Taiwan while girls don’t. But generally speaking, politics is not the most concern for them.

For travel part, since these exchanged students are taught from books that Taiwan is a Treasured Island, they have had good impression on us since then. The China government has made lots of Travel programs which introduce Taiwan and enhance their good impression by watching these Travel programs. They know from these programs about Taiwan’s geographical scenery, night markets, museum, temples, etc. All of these are triggers for these exchanged students eager to come to Taiwan after we made the policy. Among these students, most of them are more interested in travel rather than politics or stars. Perhaps it is because most of them don’t have much time following news 24 hours or Taiwan’s stars. Most of them care about Taiwan’s culture, scenery and other things that might have relation to their future, such as business of travel, cultural business, etc.

For Taiwan’s stars part, I find that girls are more likely to follow Taiwan’s dramas, movies and songs. They receive this kind of information by watching CCTV-8 or Hunan TV or Internet TV. Since Internet TV is easy to access to it, these China exchanged students always watch Taiwan’s drama and variety show on the Internet, such as ppstream, youku, tudou, youtube, etc. These are quick access for them to know about Taiwan. Take Black & White for example, the drama plays at 9:00~11:00p.m., and on the Internet TV, they can watch them at 11:00p.m. Before they come to Taiwan, these form their impression before they come to Taiwan.

Progress Report (2)

We have two meetings after last Wednesday class(2009/6/3). One was done by 2009/6/4 5:00p.m~7:00p.m; the other was done by 2009/6/5 7:00a.m.~9:30a.m. Besdies, we are supposed to meet this afternoon(2009/6/9).

I. Meeting: 2009/6/4 5:00p.m~7:00p.m

During this meeting, we interviewed a Chinese student in order to revise our Questionnaires. Generally speaking, this meeting is quite successful since the Chinese student was able to answer most questions we asked her except issues about political events. Besides, she provided many other useful information for us to revise our Questionnaires.

The student told us that they can watch Taiwan's TV program in China. What's more, the government does make many programs to introduce Taiwan to people in China. Surprisingly, the China government tell them Taiwan is a good palce where is full of nice people and beautiful scenery. But after she comes to Taiwan, she find that not all the people here are as nice as what the Chinese government has told them. Questionnaires for students from China(second Revised):

II. Meeting:2009/6/5 7:00a.m.~9:30a.m

After the last meeting, we designated each member to translate two to three questions. But we encountered some problems when we translate, so we made another meeting right away in the next day morning. During this meeting, we come up with the following revised Questionnaires. Questionnaires for students from China(the third Revised):

電視媒體如何形塑中央大學大陸交換學生對台印象

1. 您來自中國哪一省? 您就讀中國哪所大學? 您的主修為何?

a. What province of Mainland China do you come from? b. What university in Mainland China do you study in? c. What is your major?

2. 在中國當地,您最常收看的電視台為何?

What local TV channel do you mostly watch?

3. 您最常收看的電視台中, 是否有播報關於台灣的新聞?

Have these TV channels reported news about Taiwan?

4. 承上題，您對哪一類型的新聞最有興趣？(如政治、經濟或人文等)

Based on the previous question, in what kind of TV news do you take the most interest ? (Politics, economy, culture, etc.)

5. 請問在大陸各地電視台中可以看到哪些台灣製作的電視節目? 例如: 綜藝節目,政論新聞等等…

In Mainland China, what types of TV programs from Taiwan are broadcast in local TV stations? (Variety show; Political talk-show, etc.)

6. 大陸各地電視台所製作的台灣相關節目中，最吸引您的議題為何？

Amongst all the Taiwan-related TV programs produced by local TV companies, what issue appeals to you most?

7.來台之前, 大陸當地電視台如何形塑您對台灣的印象？

Before you come to Taiwan, how do local TV stations form your impression of Taiwan?

8. 您對台灣的新聞媒體印象最深的是什麼? 為什麼?

What is the most impressive part do you find in Taiwan’s news media? Why?

9. 這些印象，在您接觸台灣媒體之後, 有什麼改變？

After you have access to Taiwan’s TV media, what has been changed in your impression of Taiwan?

10. 您對台灣媒體最無法適應的是哪一點？

In your opinion, what is the most difficult part of Taiwan’s TV media to accustom to?

The following questions are for NCU students. We will deliver the Questionnaires to NCU students after we revise the questions based on the results of China exchanged students' answers. Questionnaires for students in NCU(the third Revised):

電視媒體如何形塑台灣學生對中印象 您是台灣哪裡人? 您的主修為何?

a. Where do you come from? b. What is your major?

2. 您最常收看的台灣電視台為何?

What local TV channel do you mostly watch?

3. 您最常收看的電視台中, 是否有播報關於中國的新聞?

Have these TV channels reported news about China?

4. 承上題，您對哪一類型的新聞最有興趣？(如政治、經濟或人文等)

Based on the previous question, in what kind of TV news do you take the most interest ? (Politics, economy, culture, etc.)

5. 請問在台灣各地電視台中可以看到哪些中國製作的電視節目? 例如: 綜藝節目,政論新聞等等… In Taiwan, what types of TV programs from China are broadcast in local TV stations? (Variety show; Political talk-show, etc.)

6. 台灣各個電視台所製作的中國相關節目中，最吸引您的議題為何？

Amongst all the China-related TV programs produced by Taiwan’s TV companies, what issue appeals to you most?

7.來台之前, 台灣當地電視台如何形塑您對中國的印象？

Before you’ve gone to China, how do Taiwan’s TV programs form your impression of China?

8. 您對中國的新聞媒體印象最深的是什麼? 為什麼?

What is the most impressive part do you find in China’s news media? Why?

9. 這些印象，在您接觸中國媒體之後, 有什麼改變？

After you have access to China’s TV media, what has been changed in your impression of China?

10. 您對中國媒體最無法適應的是哪一點？

In your opinion, what is the most difficult part of China’s TV media to accustom to?

Progress Report (1)

Our final project is about how China exchange students and Taiwan students form their impression before they come to China and Taiwan. We make a survey for both China exchange students and NCU students. Since our main impression of China is mainly created by mass media, especially TV. Therefore, we are going to use this survey to find out what we don’t know about the cross strait TV programs. The purpose of this project is to understand the changing of impression after the china exchanged students come to Taiwan. We will ask them to complete the questions and then, based on the questions, we would have an interview with them for more detailed information, and the same for Taiwan’s students.

The following is our first version of questions:

中央大學的重慶大學交換學生對台灣的印象之媒介所塑造

1. 請問您是大陸哪裡人？

2. 請問您平常在大陸收看的電視台為哪些？

3. 請問這些電視台是否曾報到關於台灣的新聞？報導頻率頻繁嗎？什麼類型的報導？政治相關？經濟相關？還是人文或自然景觀相關？請問是否了解台灣電視劇、台灣藝人明星之動向？請問藉由什麼媒介所了解(電視專訪、新聞報導)？是否有進口CD、影集等 台灣媒體(電視節目、新聞及報章雜誌)如何影響你認識台灣？

5. 請問這些電台是否曾製作台灣相關的特別節目？請舉例說明。

6. 請問這些電台是否曾製作台灣旅遊節目？有很多類似的節目嗎？請舉例說明。是否藉由綜藝節目來了解台灣文化?

7. 請問在大陸的電視台中是否可以看到台灣的某些電視節目？哪幾台？

8. 請問是否有在使用網路電視收看電視節目？請問是哪幾個網路電視？

9. 網路電視中(ex: ppstream) 裡面也有台灣的綜藝節目，請問是否收看？

10. 學校課程裡面是否介紹台灣的人文和自然景觀？

11. 是否藉由部落格了解台灣文化？台灣人做的部落格？還是大陸人做的？
請問透過什麼媒介來了解台灣? 1.電台 2.電視 3.網路 4.報章媒體 5.其他
在您使用的平台中，哪一家媒體公司是你最常使用的 該媒體在報導以下議題”ex反分裂國家法”的制定時，所採取的敘述方法是? 您覺得,您對台灣的印象，有讓您選用的媒體媒介所影響嗎? 這些印象，在您親自來台灣後，有改變嗎?

1. 若曾獲得異於官方報導的消息，請問多自何種管道取得？

2. 承上題，影響你對該報導可信度的判斷因素為何？

3. 對台灣的印象多聚焦於哪一部分？

4. 家人如何形塑你的印象建構？

1. 在此之前,你曾經到過台灣媽

2. 來到台灣之後,有沒有跟你想像的台灣有極大反差 乘上題 讓你感到最無法適應的是哪一點

"I Have The Biggest Banana!!” (revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
Not every person enjoys sex in SL!!

Sex places are always crowed with people whenever one log in the Second Life. People enjoy having sex by equipping big dicks to attract women in SL. But does everyone in SL enjoy hanging around sex places?

“J” is the one who does not enjoy having sex in SL. Yet, “J” has the biggest banana is SL! If you often TP to sex places, you may meet “J” there if you are lucky enough. “J” hates sex places and “J” hates people who only want to be naked or fucked or eager to hear dirty talks there. Thus, “J” gets a plan to disturb this place every now and then. In this case, a banana suit will do!

“J” wears the banana suit and comes to these “naked” and “sexy” places. Instead of wearing sexy clothes, “J” wrapped up with the banana suit and make monkey noises. Of course the banana suit is not sexy enough for those who eager to see the naked sexy body. What’s more, the monkey noises disturb those who enjoy hearing pants and screaming when having sex. But “J” does provide the most incredible there. Wearing the biggest “banana” among all the others doesn’t make “J” alluring? “Yo~~ see I got the bigggggggggggest banana~~ who can compare with me~?” “J” yells in the sex places, making lots of noises to distract people’s attention. People there may not really care about “J’s” disturbing; however, those who are looking for a place to enjoy being naked or fucked get angry. They leave the places at once when they see “J” is there screaming or even dancing as an escort. However, not every person hates “J’s” behavior. For a person who doesn’t really care about “J’s” disturbing find it amusing to see “J” being around!

Discussion on Jason's News!

Writer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)

Reviewer: Dana (Nada Copperfield)
Editor: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

***This discussion is also posted on Jason's blog as feedback.

Report of Discussion:
The writer’s story is about a place where you can get free kimono and find yourself a job. We can work as geisha here after putting on kimonos. We think that the author really find a good place for people hanging around in SL. It’s a good topic. Yet, there are a few things need to be revised in his article.

First of all, the headline “Here Is Only for Women” sounds like “men are banned from here;” but actually both men and women are available to come to this place.

Second, the author needs to add some transition between sentences or paragraphs. Sometimes we find that the author doesn’t make his idea clear so that we can hardly catch up with him. For example, “After you dress the selected kimono, you must want to know how it looks. Therefore, you could dance for a certain time in order to earn Lindens.”— We think that these two sentences have weak causality. For the first sentence “After you dress the selected kimono, you must want to know how it looks,” we readers suppose that there is a mirror or something for players who want to “know how it looks”; however, the following sentence is “Therefore, you could dance for a certain time in order to earn Lindens.’’ We cannot see any relation between these two sentences. Perhaps the author needs to elaborate on this part.

Furthermore, the author is lack of focus in this news. The author claims that his story is about getting free kimonos and working as geisha. Yet, when reading the article, it seems that the author mainly talks about free kimonos for women in the first two paragraphs; but then the focus of the story suddenly jumps to introducing this place. This makes us wonder whether his focus is about this place or about the kimonos or working as geisha here. Perhaps the author needs to rethink what he really wants to tell us about in this news.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:

[2009/04/29 0:09] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay let me start my story
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/29 0:09] Cloud Clarity: where r we now anyway
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: nxt time
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: hahahah
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: yeah
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: tokyo
[2009/04/29 0:09] Jackowacko Juliesse: here u can get the free kimono
[2009/04/29 0:09] Cloud Clarity: i want to have a japaneses clothses
[2009/04/29 0:09] Nada Copperfield: ooooh
[2009/04/29 0:09] Jackowacko Juliesse: or buy the kimono
[2009/04/29 0:09] Cloud Clarity: hhhowhowohwhowo
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: whehewhe
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: wait
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: so
[2009/04/29 0:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: meanwhile u can dance like a geisha
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: i want to wear~~~~
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: tshow us
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: wait
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: so now
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: show us
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: hahahah
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: what are we going to do now
[2009/04/29 0:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: in order to eran lindens
[2009/04/29 0:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: follow me
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohohohohohohohohohoohoohoh
[2009/04/29 0:10] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/04/29 0:10] Nada Copperfield: k
[2009/04/29 0:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: if u wanna get free kimono
[2009/04/29 0:11] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:11] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2009/04/29 0:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: here is full of the kyoto characterstics
[2009/04/29 0:16] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:16] Cloud Clarity: okokokokok
[2009/04/29 0:16] Cloud Clarity: ookokokokokkokokokok
[2009/04/29 0:17] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2009/04/29 0:17] Nada Copperfield:
[2009/04/29 0:17] Cloud Clarity: give me ur url
[2009/04/29 0:17] Cloud Clarity: blog
[2009/04/29 0:17] Nada Copperfield: please be stable .....at least on time por favor
[2009/04/29 0:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: jajason.blogspot.com?
[2009/04/29 0:17] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/29 0:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: http://jajason.blogspot.com
[2009/04/29 0:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: right
[2009/04/29 0:18] Nada Copperfield: goood
[2009/04/29 0:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: maybe u could find the free kimono around here
[2009/04/29 0:18] karikan Kytori: wait, role choosing
[2009/04/29 0:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: i forgot i take the free one
[2009/04/29 0:18] Nada Copperfield: well.....
[2009/04/29 0:19] Nada Copperfield: who is going to be the,.....
[2009/04/29 0:19] Nada Copperfield: editor
[2009/04/29 0:19] Nada Copperfield: or
[2009/04/29 0:19] Nada Copperfield: i am sick and tired of typing english by the way
[2009/04/29 0:19] karikan Kytori: i editor this time in jacko's work
[2009/04/29 0:19] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/29 0:20] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/04/29 0:20] Nada Copperfield: reviewer
[2009/04/29 0:20] Nada Copperfield: and organizer
[2009/04/29 0:20] Cloud Clarity: so i be organizer
[2009/04/29 0:20] Cloud Clarity: onononono
[2009/04/29 0:20] Cloud Clarity: me reviewer
[2009/04/29 0:20] Nada Copperfield: i am th organzer
[2009/04/29 0:21] Nada Copperfield: and pleae theunstable you can go ahead now
[2009/04/29 0:21] karikan Kytori: yep, go on jacko
[2009/04/29 0:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/04/29 0:21] Nada Copperfield: jacko
[2009/04/29 0:21] karikan Kytori: story telling now
[2009/04/29 0:21] Nada Copperfield: gone again
[2009/04/29 0:21] Nada Copperfield: goood boy gone again
[2009/04/29 0:21] Nada Copperfield: iam going to eat him up
[2009/04/29 0:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: and here u could experience as u travel aboad
[2009/04/29 0:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: thisis the outline of my story
[2009/04/29 0:23] Cloud Clarity: wati i am organizzer this timee haha
[2009/04/29 0:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: the story is really shoty
[2009/04/29 0:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: short
[2009/04/29 0:23] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/29 0:23] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:24] Nada Copperfield: the fist line is .......
[2009/04/29 0:24] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2009/04/29 0:24] Nada Copperfield: a littble bit wierd
[2009/04/29 0:24] Nada Copperfield: the first sentence
[2009/04/29 0:24] karikan Kytori: why do u mean in ur headline? only for women?
[2009/04/29 0:24] Cloud Clarity: i want to throw up
[2009/04/29 0:24] Nada Copperfield: does anyone have the smae thinking or idea
[2009/04/29 0:24] karikan Kytori: then why do we come here?
[2009/04/29 0:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: if u want to earn money
[2009/04/29 0:24] Cloud Clarity: i don't think the topic is quite clear
[2009/04/29 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz woman wear kimono is really beautiful
[2009/04/29 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: like u can see now
[2009/04/29 0:25] Nada Copperfield: mmmmmmmmmm
[2009/04/29 0:25] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/29 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i think here is only for women
[2009/04/29 0:25] karikan Kytori: no, i mean, if u say here is only for women
[2009/04/29 0:25] karikan Kytori: it sounds like men are not allowed here
[2009/04/29 0:26] Cloud Clarity: yes
[2009/04/29 0:26] Cloud Clarity: u gys banned
[2009/04/29 0:26] Cloud Clarity: !!!!!
[2009/04/29 0:26] Cloud Clarity: out
[2009/04/29 0:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz i want the reader feel curious of the topic
[2009/04/29 0:26] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/04/29 0:26] Nada Copperfield: the sixth line
[2009/04/29 0:26] Nada Copperfield: six line
[2009/04/29 0:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/04/29 0:26] Nada Copperfield: check it
[2009/04/29 0:27] Nada Copperfield: check it does not mean go away
[2009/04/29 0:27] karikan Kytori: why do u mention the name of the place at the very beginning of the story, but just the name, nothing going on
[2009/04/29 0:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz the focus is on the place
[2009/04/29 0:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: i want to introduce the place
[2009/04/29 0:28] Cloud Clarity: After you dress the selected kimono, you must want to know how it looks. Therefore, you could dance for a certain time in order to earn Lindens.--->i think that these two sentences have weak causalty
[2009/04/29 0:28] Nada Copperfield: the six line！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
[2009/04/29 0:28] karikan Kytori: then u should elaborate the sentence
[2009/04/29 0:28] karikan Kytori: not just one word
[2009/04/29 0:29] karikan Kytori: let's see 6th line now
[2009/04/29 0:29] Nada Copperfield: the sixthe line
[2009/04/29 0:29] Nada Copperfield: hahahahaha
[2009/04/29 0:29] karikan Kytori: otherwise, nada is going to explode
[2009/04/29 0:29] Nada Copperfield: gooood
[2009/04/29 0:29] Nada Copperfield: hahahahaha
[2009/04/29 0:29] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/04/29 0:30] karikan Kytori: what is it in 6th line?
[2009/04/29 0:30] Nada Copperfield: are you here Jacko
[2009/04/29 0:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/04/29 0:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: i know
[2009/04/29 0:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/04/29 0:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: yep
[2009/04/29 0:31] Nada Copperfield: so is the sixth line okya or not
[2009/04/29 0:31] Nada Copperfield: if it is okay then let's move to other lines
[2009/04/29 0:32] karikan Kytori: tell us why u want to single it out, nada
[2009/04/29 0:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: i know two meanwhiles
[2009/04/29 0:32] Nada Copperfield: oh
[2009/04/29 0:32] Nada Copperfield: the
[2009/04/29 0:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will edit
[2009/04/29 0:33] Nada Copperfield: when get the X one
[2009/04/29 0:33] Cloud Clarity: hey~the last para
[2009/04/29 0:33] Cloud Clarity: ifidn that
[2009/04/29 0:33] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/04/29 0:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/04/29 0:34] Cloud Clarity: it issuddenly jump into the last para
[2009/04/29 0:34] Cloud Clarity: i mean
[2009/04/29 0:34] Nada Copperfield: why?????
[2009/04/29 0:34] Nada Copperfield: oh welll......
[2009/04/29 0:34] Cloud Clarity: it has no strong connection to the preceious
[2009/04/29 0:34] Cloud Clarity: previous one
[2009/04/29 0:34] Nada Copperfield: are we talking about the sixthe lin or th last paragraph
[2009/04/29 0:34] karikan Kytori: last sentence is really weird
[2009/04/29 0:35] Nada Copperfield: i mean when get the new one is a right sentence??????
[2009/04/29 0:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: but i didnot know how to introduce here
[2009/04/29 0:35] Cloud Clarity: oh we haven't findied the sex line?
[2009/04/29 0:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: yo?
[2009/04/29 0:35] karikan Kytori: six, not sex
[2009/04/29 0:35] Nada Copperfield: fine
[2009/04/29 0:35] Nada Copperfield: its okay
[2009/04/29 0:36] Cloud Clarity: my computure lag u know
[2009/04/29 0:36] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/29 0:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: the last
[2009/04/29 0:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: how to edit
[2009/04/29 0:37] Cloud Clarity: i am going to change computer for a while
[2009/04/29 0:37] Cloud Clarity: it drives me carzy this computer
[2009/04/29 0:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: i didnot know how to conclude the whole article
[2009/04/29 0:37] Cloud Clarity is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:38] karikan Kytori: i mean why do u say where u live now in the last sentence?
[2009/04/29 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2009/04/29 0:38] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/29 0:38] karikan Kytori: no one
[2009/04/29 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: herhe
[2009/04/29 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: herhe
[2009/04/29 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: here
[2009/04/29 0:38] karikan Kytori: jacko, did u see my Q?
[2009/04/29 0:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: Q?
[2009/04/29 0:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: i see dana
[2009/04/29 0:39] karikan Kytori: question
[2009/04/29 0:39] Nada Copperfield: ＼＝ ＝
[2009/04/29 0:39] Nada Copperfield: you see me and i see you tooo
[2009/04/29 0:39] karikan Kytori: i said why u say where u live in the last sen.
[2009/04/29 0:39] Nada Copperfield: but that is not hte poioht
[2009/04/29 0:39] Cloud Clarity is Online
[2009/04/29 0:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: huh?
[2009/04/29 0:40] karikan Kytori: here comes the lovely lady
[2009/04/29 0:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/04/29 0:40] Cloud Clarity: ok gooood this is muchhhhhhhhh better now for htis comoputer~~~~
[2009/04/29 0:40] Cloud Clarity: gosh
[2009/04/29 0:40] karikan Kytori: look at ur last sen.
[2009/04/29 0:40] karikan Kytori: why do u mean?
[2009/04/29 0:40] karikan Kytori: where we live?
[2009/04/29 0:40] Nada Copperfield: we live in Taiwan
[2009/04/29 0:40] karikan Kytori: what does it have to do with ur story
[2009/04/29 0:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: or i should revise as visit
[2009/04/29 0:41] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2009/04/29 0:42] Cloud Clarity: gpsh
[2009/04/29 0:42] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2009/04/29 0:42] Cloud Clarity: he log out again
[2009/04/29 0:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: here
[2009/04/29 0:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i should revise as visit
[2009/04/29 0:42] karikan Kytori: it is equipped with different culture where u live now
[2009/04/29 0:42] karikan Kytori: what does it mean?
[2009/04/29 0:42] IM: Cloud Clarity: thx\
[2009/04/29 0:43] karikan Kytori: i do not understand this ent.
[2009/04/29 0:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i mean u can experiece the differculture
[2009/04/29 0:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: from taiwan
[2009/04/29 0:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: when u get here
[2009/04/29 0:44] karikan Kytori: where is that lovely and spicy princess?
[2009/04/29 0:44] Cloud Clarity: huh??
[2009/04/29 0:45] karikan Kytori: i see u now
[2009/04/29 0:45] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/04/29 0:45] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/04/29 0:45] Cloud Clarity: the last para
[2009/04/29 0:45] Cloud Clarity: for me
[2009/04/29 0:45] Cloud Clarity: it is not stroung because
[2009/04/29 0:46] Cloud Clarity: your focus in the previous para
[2009/04/29 0:46] Cloud Clarity: seems that
[2009/04/29 0:46] Jackowacko Juliesse: the kimono and the earning money?
[2009/04/29 0:46] Cloud Clarity: the earning linden is not the main focus
[2009/04/29 0:46] Jackowacko Juliesse: the kimono?
[2009/04/29 0:46] Cloud Clarity: yes i thinkg
[2009/04/29 0:47] Cloud Clarity: what ii fell like is that
[2009/04/29 0:47] karikan Kytori: hey, in ur 2nd para. u say one would like to know how she looks when she wears kimono
[2009/04/29 0:47] karikan Kytori: and u suddenly jump to money earning
[2009/04/29 0:47] Cloud Clarity: kimono i s the main piont
[2009/04/29 0:47] karikan Kytori: it's too abrupt
[2009/04/29 0:47] Cloud Clarity: not hte earning money
[2009/04/29 0:47] karikan Kytori: yep, focus on kimono part
[2009/04/29 0:47] Cloud Clarity: so if u wwant to brough upo earning money as a focus
[2009/04/29 0:47] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/04/29 0:47] Cloud Clarity: you should revice and elaborate it
[2009/04/29 0:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: but earning lindens is simole
[2009/04/29 0:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: ple
[2009/04/29 0:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: just dance like the geisha
[2009/04/29 0:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: how to elaborate
[2009/04/29 0:48] karikan Kytori: u could add that of course
[2009/04/29 0:48] karikan Kytori: but do not jump so fast
[2009/04/29 0:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/04/29 0:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: u mean the change the fit and earn lindens
[2009/04/29 0:49] karikan Kytori: i mean when u say girls would like to know how they look
[2009/04/29 0:49] Cloud Clarity: so
[2009/04/29 0:49] karikan Kytori: then tell the readers how to look at themselves
[2009/04/29 0:50] karikan Kytori: do not jump to money at this moment
[2009/04/29 0:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: huh?
[2009/04/29 0:50] Cloud Clarity: i know what alnal mean
[2009/04/29 0:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: fit them
[2009/04/29 0:50] Cloud Clarity: he means that
[2009/04/29 0:50] karikan Kytori: gooooooood
[2009/04/29 0:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/04/29 0:50] Cloud Clarity: u say "After you dress the selected kimono, you must want to know how it looks. "
[2009/04/29 0:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: when i first see this sentence
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: i first think of
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: there might be a mirror
[2009/04/29 0:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: or sth
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: but the outcome is
[2009/04/29 0:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i need to add the fitting pat
[2009/04/29 0:51] Cloud Clarity: u say we can go paly as gashi
[2009/04/29 0:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz here proides the fitting room
[2009/04/29 0:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: ==
[2009/04/29 0:52] Cloud Clarity: waht't this
[2009/04/29 0:52] Cloud Clarity: hahahaha
[2009/04/29 0:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: what happened
[2009/04/29 0:52] karikan Kytori: nada wants to kill us all
[2009/04/29 0:52] karikan Kytori: poor we
[2009/04/29 0:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/04/29 0:52] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/29 0:52] Nada Copperfield: go on
[2009/04/29 0:52] Cloud Clarity: so do u get it
[2009/04/29 0:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: ok i know
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: i am dying
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: itr we findished
[2009/04/29 0:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: i should explain how we look
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: or is there any more ideas?
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: yes
[2009/04/29 0:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: and we can earn lindens by playing as geisha
[2009/04/29 0:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: righ?
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: or y can say
[2009/04/29 0:53] Cloud Clarity: what can we do after wearing kimono
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: that is paly as geisha
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: it will be much more clearer
[2009/04/29 0:54] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: edittor
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: any more idea?
[2009/04/29 0:54] Jackowacko Juliesse: its 4
[2009/04/29 0:54] Jackowacko Juliesse: omg
[2009/04/29 0:54] Cloud Clarity: yes omg
[2009/04/29 0:55] Cloud Clarity: dying
[2009/04/29 0:55] karikan Kytori: in ur 1st para, u say that wearing kimono is a dream
[2009/04/29 0:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes?
[2009/04/29 0:55] karikan Kytori: r u sure everyone thinks so?
[2009/04/29 0:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: maybe
[2009/04/29 0:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i shoudl delete this part
[2009/04/29 0:56] karikan Kytori: maybe u could say wearing clothes of other country is good or special
[2009/04/29 0:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: okay
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: so....
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: r we findish
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: dini?
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: fini?
[2009/04/29 0:56] karikan Kytori: no more opinion
[2009/04/29 0:56] karikan Kytori: fin
[2009/04/29 0:56] Cloud Clarity: k
[2009/04/29 0:57] Cloud Clarity: who's next

I Have The Biggest Banana!!

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
Making trouble in Second Life

Sex places are always crowed with people whenever one log in the Second Life. People enjoy having sex by equipping big dicks to attract women in SL. Yet, have you ever met the biggest banana in the SL that can annoy people around the sex places?
A woman named Jane would love to wear the biggest “banana” in SL love places!

If you are the frequent guest to sex places, you may meet her there if you are lucky enough. Jane hates sex places and she hates people who only want to be naked or fucked or listen to dirty talks in those places. Therefore, she gets a plan to disturb this place every now and then. A suit of banana will do!

She wears the banana suit and comes to these places. Instead of making pants or screaming (which people usually make when having sex), she choose to make monkey voices or singing songs in these places to disturb people having sex. “Yo~~see I got the bigggggggggggest banana~~do you want to have sex with me~?” Jane yelled in the sex place, making lots of noises to distract people’s attention. People there might not really care about her disturbing; however, those who are looking for a place to enjoy being naked or fucked get angry. They leave the places at once when they see Jane is there yelling, screaming or even dancing like an escort. Well, a banana escort, never seen one before?

Who Plays Music?(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A DJ with a microphone makes SL real!

I never expected to meet a DJ in a SL club. I used to think that a “DJ ball” was a system for SL avatar to play as if he were a DJ. Yet, I found out I was wrong when I met the DJ Michael Skosh. He let me know that music in SL sometimes still needs a REAL person to carry out.

I accidentally met Michael when I joined a club party. Music there was playing as all other clubs; but suddenly I noticed that there was something different. At the interval of different songs I heard a soft, charming and steady voice coming out of my earphones. His voice was so professional that I first thought that it was a radio broadcast. However, I found out later that it was NOT from a radio. It was the DJ who was talking to us! And what’s more, he was once a real DJ in 80’s in the US!

Michael really enjoyed being a DJ. While chatting with me, he was sitting in front of his computer, monitoring it and introducing songs to the whole clubs. His voice made the SL much real. It was just like listening to radios where you might have a chance to order songs you like. His amusing introduction of each song made people laugh and build up an excited atmosphere for the SL club. Dancing in SL no longer bores me since I can not only watch the system activate my avatar but also expect to listen to more interesting addressing for each song!

Discussion on Alan's News!

Writer: Alan (karikan Kytori)

Reviewer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Editor: Dana (Nada Copperfield)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

***This discussion is also posted on Alan's blog as feedback.

P.S. Due to the fact that we discussed all 4 stories till 8 p.m. on Wednesday, we had another edition on Alan’s story again on Friday morning. I conclude what we find out this morning in the following suggestion. (In fact, we really do think Alan’s story is too good to revise. But later we find this morning that there are still some problems. Perhaps we all get tired o Wednesday after staying in SL for 6 hours…lol)

Report of Discussion:

The writer’s story is about a working place in Nipponbashi in SL. People who work here are like animals in the farms pushing against that wheel to grind. The author thinks that people circling around the huge log again and again is like an endlessly routine life which many fear in real life. We think that the author has an interesting relation to a routine life in RL. Yet, perhaps the author should make the relation much clearer. He could elaborate on the second paragraph to foreshadow that the routine work in Nipponbashi in SL is like the routine life in RL. What’s more, it’s interesting that people in SL rush here to get a routine work while most people hate this kind of work in RL. Perhaps the author should also work on the third paragraph to dwell on the point he is trying to make. Lastly, perhaps Alan could introduce the job first in the first paragraph instead of the second in order to make a transition.

Here is a little grammatical problem:
There might be quite a lot places to make money, and I happen to come to an interesting place where one could obtain some free Lindens through one’s own labor.
>>>

There might be quite a lot places to make money; and I happen to come to an interesting place where one could obtain some free Lindens through one’s own labor.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:

[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: so u all select ur roles already?
[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: then i'm going to start
[2009/04/15 3:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: viewer
[2009/04/15 3:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: i am so tired
[2009/04/15 3:57] karikan Kytori: http://britbiscuits.blogspot.com/
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: my story is about this place where u could earn money
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: as u just see
[2009/04/15 3:58] karikan Kytori: it's not quick money, but many people still come here
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: in my 1st para, i wrote about manu people would like to know how to earn money
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: then i introduce this place
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: and how to earn Lindens
[2009/04/15 3:59] karikan Kytori: just push against that wheel
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: then i talked about why i feel interested in this place
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: coz the camping makes people look like animals
[2009/04/15 4:00] karikan Kytori: cattles or horses in the farm'
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: at last i wrote about my own reflection about this palce and the job
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: it's like an endlessly routine life
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: and that's what many people fear in real life
[2009/04/15 4:01] karikan Kytori: that's it
[2009/04/15 4:02] Cloud Clarity: k wait
[2009/04/15 4:03] Cloud Clarity: so gooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:03] Cloud Clarity: hahah
[2009/04/15 4:03] Nada Copperfield: goooood
[2009/04/15 4:03] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:04] Jackowacko Juliesse: goooooood
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: LOL
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: SERIOUS
[2009/04/15 4:04] Cloud Clarity: WE ARE
[2009/04/15 4:04] Nada Copperfield: goooooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:04] Nada Copperfield: we are serious
[2009/04/15 4:05] Cloud Clarity: LOL
[2009/04/15 4:06] Nada Copperfield: organizer remembers to take pic
[2009/04/15 4:06] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: alan
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: yes?
[2009/04/15 4:07] Nada Copperfield: i think you article is nearly perfect
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: don't say that
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: i think emma would not think so
[2009/04/15 4:07] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:07] Cloud Clarity: reallymmmmmmm
[2009/04/15 4:07] Cloud Clarity: that me seee
[2009/04/15 4:09] Nada Copperfield: yes>
[2009/04/15 4:09] Nada Copperfield: I AM READING
[2009/04/15 4:12] karikan Kytori: what? done?
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: i finish
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: rightnow
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: is a gooooooooood
[2009/04/15 4:12] Cloud Clarity: time
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 4:12] Nada Copperfield: i like yoour third paragraph
[2009/04/15 4:13] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/04/15 4:14] karikan Kytori: more opinions on my work?
[2009/04/15 4:15] karikan Kytori: who's my organiser?
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: here
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: gosh
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: i am reading ur wordk
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: i am trying to read and read nad read agiain and agina
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: k
[2009/04/15 4:16] karikan Kytori: too serious
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: i read= ="
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: well.....
[2009/04/15 4:16] Nada Copperfield: it is goood
[2009/04/15 4:16] Cloud Clarity: jason
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: maybe
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: what's ur opinion?
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: you can put what is the job in the first paragraph
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: that is all i can think of
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: sorruy
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: make the wheel more clear
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: i really think its' great
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: the metioning of the job or somehting
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: right?
[2009/04/15 4:17] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: if i have other opinion
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: i wll teel u
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: i'll think of ot
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: in private
[2009/04/15 4:17] karikan Kytori: it
[2009/04/15 4:17] Cloud Clarity: in msn
[2009/04/15 4:18] karikan Kytori: ok

Unexpectedly Meeting

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A crazy American DJ with a microphone!

Never expected to meet a real DJ in Second Life? Here let me introduce you Michael Skosh, a crazy American DJ as well as a SL mentor!

I accidentally met him when I joined a club party. Music there is playing as usual; but suddenly I noticed that there is something different. At the interval of different songs I heard a soft, charming and steady voice coming out of my earphones. His voice is so professional that I first thought that it was playing by radio. However, I found out later that it was NOT from a radio. It was the DJ who was talking to us! And what’s more, he was once a real DJ in 80’s in the US!

Michael really enjoys being a DJ. While talking to me, he was sitting in front of his computer, monitoring it and introducing songs to the whole clubs. His voice makes the SL much real. It is just like listening to radios where you might have a chance to order songs you like. His amusing introduction of each song makes people laugh and build up an excited atmosphere for the SL club. Dancing in SL no longer bores me since I cannot only watch the system activated my avatar but also expect to listen to more interesting addressing for each song!

What Is Under The Tents?

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A way to show Taiwanese hospitality.

Banzhuo is a Taiwanese expression, which refers to outdoor, or street-side catered banquets held in large tents. Whenever festivals, wedding occasions, political events arrive, tents would appear in streets and alleys especially in the central and southern parts of Taiwan. The larger scale of Banzhuo might serve hundreds people. Some passionate as well as wealthy hosts would also invite passers-by to join the feast. After settling down all tables, cooks would serve dishes one after another. Any guest could feel free to come and go; therefore, we call this kind of Banzhuo “open-air banquet.”

Open-air banquet usually appears when there is a temple fair. Take Dajia Mazu Pilgrimage for example. It is the biggest event of the year for Mazu’s believers, which is held around Aperil. More than 100 thousand followers from all around Taiwan organize a huge pilgrimage group, marching more than 300 kilometers on foot to Feng Tien Palace in Hsin Kang and return to Dajia Mazu Temple. Some believers who do not follow the pilgrimage stay in their hometown and hold open-air banquets all along the way to Hsin Kang, providing a shed for followers to eat and rest. Meanwhile, they hope their family who take part in the pilgrimage could also find sheds to take a rest and enjoy good food in other counties.

Although cuisines in open-air banquet would not be the best, they are cooked by believers with their best dishes! Every dish is filled with warm and sincere; and their hospitality does play a crucial role in Taiwan’s eating culture. Taiwanese eat not only food but also the atmosphere around when eating. The culture of Banzhuo is all about eating the “atmosphere.” It is really time for family and friends to gather together as well as for visitors or passers-by to feel the warms from Taiwanese!

Welcome to Bamboo Town!(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's TaKeng Scenic Area

Daken is one of the most important recreational and tourist areas in Taichung. Residents and non-local people alike love to visit Daken not only for hiking but for delicacies from Daken!

Driving along Dong Shan Road, you will meet a round fork where delicious food is all around. Among all delicacies, the most famous one is cuisine cooking with bamboo. Here we have a time-honored restaurant with well-cooked Bamboo cuisines. Let me introduce you to Bamboo Town, the well-known restaurant in Daken.

Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Daken in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. It is quite different from the electric steaming rice for the bamboo makes it smell like we are in the bamboo forests. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

Welcome to Bamboo Town!
If you want to enjoy delicious bamboo cuisines, welcome to Taichung where bamboo flourishes. Many media has reported about bamboo cuisines around Daken, especially about Bamboo Town, the time-honored restaurant! Sitting in the restaurant, you will find many signature form celebrity and media. Give it a chance for your palate! You will fall in love with it!

Discussion on Jason's News!

**The following discussion, summary and adivce will be posted on Jason's blog as feedback.

Writer: Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Reviewer: Dana (Nada Copperfield)

Editor: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)

Report on the Discussion:

Jason’s story is about famous Eva puff in Tainan which is renowned for its ice cream stuff with eight flavors. Our group members are really amazed by the pictures that Jason took. These pictures really grab readers’ attentions even before we read it! It is a good start to make an attraction. Yet, in his article, what we concerned about is that there is a strange leap in the second paragraph: “But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.” Here we find no transition between these two sentences. We even don’t know which blog he is mentioned. So we suggest him that he should revise that part like adding a transition. As readers, we want to know why he should mention the blog. Does it has anything to do with Eva’s celebrity? That’s what we want to know about and is very crucial in making the whole story complete.

Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:
[2009/03/25 1:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: next~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:14] Fiona Galaxy is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:14] Makong Broono is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: who's next= =
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: me?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: writer?
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 1:15] karikan Kytori: ok, then i'm evaluator
[2009/03/25 1:15] Nada Copperfield: i am the reviwer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Cloud Clarity: organizer
[2009/03/25 1:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: my story is talking about the EVA puff
[2009/03/25 1:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is special in taiwan
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: link~~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: please
[2009/03/25 1:16] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: http://jajason.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: so sweet
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: 中文是啥？eva?
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: olivia is yelling behin me = =
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: someday saves her please
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: but the pic is so delicious~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: she is crazier than me
[2009/03/25 1:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: 依娃
[2009/03/25 1:17] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohohoh
[2009/03/25 1:17] Nada Copperfield: you are a professional potoghoprraoger
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: yes u r
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: so delicious
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: hey jacko
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: i wanna eat that
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: i want to eat
[2009/03/25 1:18] Nada Copperfield: bring it ot me please
[2009/03/25 1:18] Jackowacko Juliesse: it's ice cream
[2009/03/25 1:18] Cloud Clarity: me too
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: i cannot take here
[2009/03/25 1:19] Nada Copperfield: i know
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: NCKU?
[2009/03/25 1:19] Cloud Clarity: 成功？
[2009/03/25 1:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:20] karikan Kytori: what do u mean by "based on the article on the blog?"
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: based on the article on the blog? of the blog
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: i spell the wrong word
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: hey jason i thkin there is something that might be wrong
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes?
[2009/03/25 1:21] karikan Kytori: u mean the blog of yhe shop?
[2009/03/25 1:21] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: some blogger
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: i eman the nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste
[2009/03/25 1:22] Nada Copperfield: is it a litte wierd
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: the morphology?
[2009/03/25 1:22] Cloud Clarity: ｓｏ　ｗｈｉｃｈ　ｂｌｏｇ？
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: or lemonellen?
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: u mean my morphology
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: what is bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: well i am not talling about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: i am talking the lines
[2009/03/25 1:23] karikan Kytori: there are some grammatical errors to be corrected in ur revision
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:23] Nada Copperfield: danke
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: it's not big deal ~~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: but the blog......
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste.
[2009/03/25 1:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: the sentence?
[2009/03/25 1:24] Nada Copperfield: yes the sentence
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i dunno what you guyes are talking about the blog
[2009/03/25 1:25] Nada Copperfield: i am fine with it so far
[2009/03/25 1:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is not a big deal
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz olivian asked me
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: which blog= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: uhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:26] Nada Copperfield: hayah you still need to correct it muahuahuahua
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:26] Cloud Clarity: it's cuz alan ask first= =
[2009/03/25 1:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will~~~~
[2009/03/25 1:26] karikan Kytori: what i mean is not about which blog
[2009/03/25 1:27] karikan Kytori: i mean why u mentioned others' blogs in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:27] Cloud Clarity: ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: i saw it
[2009/03/25 1:27] Nada Copperfield: what blog did you mean>
[2009/03/25 1:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz it really tasted by others
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: the blog online
[2009/03/25 1:28] Nada Copperfield: or you just told them, if it is so haha ignore me
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: should i revise these part
[2009/03/25 1:28] Jackowacko Juliesse: about which blog?
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: it;s not clear
[2009/03/25 1:29] Cloud Clarity: i see that part in ur article
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's abrupt to see this
[2009/03/25 1:30] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i should emphsize on which i blog i quote from?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:30] Cloud Clarity: it's better if u add that
[2009/03/25 1:30] karikan Kytori: so u want to gain some guarantee from others' blogs?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: extraodinary?
[2009/03/25 1:30] Nada Copperfield: the extrodianry
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant.
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: should you add the extraodianry of what or it is okay
[2009/03/25 1:31] Nada Copperfield: haha i dunno quite sure
[2009/03/25 1:31] Jackowacko Juliesse: i want to gurantee the flavor is really good
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: haha i know i mean
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i quote from the blog called bajenny
[2009/03/25 1:32] karikan Kytori: i know why i felt weird
[2009/03/25 1:32] Jackowacko Juliesse: ??
[2009/03/25 1:32] Nada Copperfield: the extraodinary is enoguh or you should add "the extraodinayr of waht'
[2009/03/25 1:33] karikan Kytori: coz the former sentence goes that milk sold the best
[2009/03/25 1:33] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: o i c
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: unrelatted?
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:33] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant. But before you ready to savor the puff, you should wait for a while until the ice cream becomes a little bit of softness.
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: these part?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i also feel something weird\
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/25 1:34] Nada Copperfield: jump too fast?
[2009/03/25 1:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: i would revise the sentece
[2009/03/25 1:34] karikan Kytori: it's unclear enough
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: Get lost!
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: why u r so silent?
[2009/03/25 1:38] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: i asked how do i revise
[2009/03/25 1:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 1:38] Cloud Clarity: i'm wondering
[2009/03/25 1:38] Nada Copperfield: Please!
[2009/03/25 1:39] Nada Copperfield: is it becasuee it is a litte bit abpurt that you jump from milk than to the blogger?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Tash Sobczak: y
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: to the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: is that so?
[2009/03/25 1:40] Nada Copperfield: haha \
[2009/03/25 1:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: i only quote from the blog
[2009/03/25 1:40] Cloud Clarity: i think if u want to say about blogger, u perhaps should give the link?
[2009/03/25 1:40] IM: Zoey Itano: ?
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o i ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: o totally and finally completely ce
[2009/03/25 1:41] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:41] Jackowacko Juliesse: coz i want everyone to realize what the flavor is the best-selling
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i think the reason u quoted from the blogs is not clear
[2009/03/25 1:42] Nada Copperfield: that is what the blogger said??
[2009/03/25 1:42] karikan Kytori: i do not understand what u want to focus on when i first read it
[2009/03/25 1:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i do not understand what u want to focus
[2009/03/25 1:43] Nada Copperfield: oh then you choose the wron the blogger
[2009/03/25 1:43] Jackowacko Juliesse: i dunno what the meaning of alan said
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: dana
[2009/03/25 1:45] Jackowacko Juliesse: u r dancing?
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: i know why. coz u divide them into two sentences
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: so i think u r talking about two different things
[2009/03/25 1:45] karikan Kytori: she's b;azing
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: HOOOOOOHOOOOOHOOOOO
[2009/03/25 1:45] Cloud Clarity: Hoooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: nein
[2009/03/25 1:45] Nada Copperfield: = = \\\\
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/25 1:46] Cloud Clarity: do u know what we are talking about jacko?
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: i still think these two sentences are irrelevant
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: = = haha
[2009/03/25 1:46] Nada Copperfield: this blogger is ........ not understandable
[2009/03/25 1:46] karikan Kytori: maybe dana could explain it
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: uh.....
[2009/03/25 1:47] karikan Kytori: i don't know how to explain my feeling
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u sould paraphrase
[2009/03/25 1:47] Nada Copperfield: okay what i think is that
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: like according to the blog byjenny...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: the blogger mentioned that...
[2009/03/25 1:47] Cloud Clarity: sort of
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: first the blogger is talking about the best thing of this store, then she said we should wait for the ice cream Blahblahblah
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: so what i think is that are they relevant???= =
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: i dunno
[2009/03/25 1:48] Cloud Clarity: or u need a transition
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:48] Nada Copperfield: haha
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: i will revise
[2009/03/25 1:49] Cloud Clarity: at least u should say why you quote the blog or why this blog so importatnt
[2009/03/25 1:49] Nada Copperfield: is that so ALAn????? or what you concerned of is another thinng
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: this is not only one said like bajenny said
[2009/03/25 1:50] karikan Kytori: i agree with u
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: many ppl said about this
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: u sould emphasis at first not until the third paragraph did the sentence show up
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: oh
[2009/03/25 1:50] Cloud Clarity: so perhaps u should not quot?
[2009/03/25 1:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:51] Jackowacko Juliesse: that's why i did not link to the linkinh
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: calm down
[2009/03/25 1:51] karikan Kytori: crazy woman
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: stop her jacko
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: or
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: follow her
[2009/03/25 1:51] Cloud Clarity: XDDDDDDD
[2009/03/25 1:51] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: what;s wrong
[2009/03/25 1:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one is crazyyyyyyyyyyyy
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 1:52] Nada Copperfield: mensch what is going on
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: HAHAHAHAH
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: go back everyon
[2009/03/25 1:52] Cloud Clarity: e
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: what should we do
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: jacko needs help muahaha
[2009/03/25 1:53] Una Rewell is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:53] Jackowacko Juliesse: i know the question of the article
[2009/03/25 1:53] Nada Copperfield: do you mean that could should mention the blog first?
[2009/03/25 1:53] Cloud Clarity: ook
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: jacko should .......
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: typo = =
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: \
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sorry
[2009/03/25 1:54] Nada Copperfield: sh*
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: don't just jump into "the blog"
[2009/03/25 1:54] Cloud Clarity: we reader don't knok what's that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: ja ja
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: and what's so important about this quot
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: so i still put on the linking?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Amberlin Zuta is Offline
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: but it not only this blog said like that
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: no need for the link
[2009/03/25 1:55] karikan Kytori: i think
[2009/03/25 1:55] Cloud Clarity: coz u said many people buy EVA because of the blog?
[2009/03/25 1:55] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dand ...
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: every one who taste the ouff
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: fall
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: s
[2009/03/25 1:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: has the same feeling like the blig
[2009/03/25 1:56] karikan Kytori: dana becomes nada now
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: dana is stuck downstair muahhaa
[2009/03/25 1:56] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: ?
[2009/03/25 1:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: so ?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: perhaps u can ssay...
[2009/03/25 1:58] karikan Kytori: do not trip on me, obasan
[2009/03/25 1:58] Jackowacko Juliesse: transition?
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 1:58] Nada Copperfield: tranisition
[2009/03/25 1:58] Cloud Clarity: ha yeah@@
[2009/03/25 1:59] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/25 1:59] Cloud Clarity: okay

Welcome to Bamboo Town!

Taste delicious cuisines around Taichung's Ta-Keng Scenic Zone


Bamboo Town
Bamboo Town locates on the foothill of Takeng in Taichung. It is a unique restaurant where makes people feel like sitting among Bamboo forest. Most decoration and setting are made of bamboo which makes people feel friendly and warm at the sight of the overall color and atmosphere.

Bamboo Rice
The restaurant not only provides customers a nice place around bamboo to eat, but it also provides customers a bamboo bowl with steamed rice. They peel the bamboo, leaving only a circle of green peel, and craft it in a certain shape as decoration. Steaming the rice with the bamboo bowl opens your appetite. You can excavate all the rice from the bowl and find out the membrane of it. It is the best part and full of nutrition. Beside Bamboo Rice, there are soup, shrimp and Chinese cabbage cooked with the bamboo bowl.

Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce
Here it also provides cuisines without bamboo. Ribs Marivated with Brown Sauce is the most famous of the restaurant. Take a quick look at this cuisine, you may think that it is full of fat meet. Yet, you are totally wrong. They are in fact ribs that cook for a long time until it turns into the soft and palatable cuisines.

What can pieces of bread satisfy a glutton?(Revised)

BY OLIVIA WEI FANG
A simple composition brings you a fresh aspect.

Whenever it comes to palatable food, has it ever occurred to you that sandwiches could also be named in the-food-you-must-eat list? Here in Taichung Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary offer you an opportunity to experience different savor of sandwich!

Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary is located on Ziyou Road opposite Taiwan Taichung District Court. It is a time-honored shop founded in 1946. Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary has long held a reputation for its famous delicacies especially its renowned advertisement sandwich!

This delicious sandwich is disguised with a plain look; however, as long as you take a bite, you will discover its delectableness. Disclosing each layer, ham and omelet with special-made Mayonnaise reveal before your eyes. Do not belittle this unattractive composition. It is this simple composition makes the sandwich amazingly tasty and refreshing. Even if it is a little expensive for NT$25 per advertisement sandwich, it is still worth a try. The sandwich is not grease even though it contains Mayonnaise; this special-mixed dressing plays a crucial role in providing pleasant to our palate. Moreover, it can serve as a desert for an afternoon tea. Fans of Hong Rui-Zhen advertisement sandwich always line up for a pile of boxes (10~12 sandwiches per box). Every customer just can’t wait to enjoy sandwiches and finishes two or three within minutes.

Next Magazine once honored the sandwich to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Although it is a little exaggerated to be the “best”, it still can be listed at top 10. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches. If you do bother to go to Taichung for a try, just post your wishes there; groups of people will be glad to join you to order sandwiches and share the delivery fees.

Just give it a try! You may fall in love with it!

Discussion on Alan's News!

Writer: Alan (karikan Kytori)
Reviewer:Jason (Jackowacko Juliesse)
Editor: Dana (Nada Copperfield)
Organizer: Olivia (Cloud Clarity)


Report on the Discussion:

The news is about the special roast chickens in Jiouchiunghu, Sinpu (Hsinchu County). The writer begins the story with the celebrity of the roast chickens which attracts a large number of people to give it a try. Next, he mentions how it is cooked and focuses readers’ attentions on the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens. Then he makes an ending about the way it is served.

All of our group members (editor, reviewer, organizer) think that it is a good piece of work. First, he has a focus on how these chickens are cooked. Second, the comparison between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens provides readers a different aspect to further understand the chickens’ uniqueness. In addition, the ending is quite interesting both by telling readers how you should eat them ( “…just forget your knife and fork at home and simply use your hands to enjoy the meal: It is no time for table manners”) and adding a luring picture of a roast chicken at the end of the story, which gives a hint that “he should say no more but just EAT IT!!”

For the weakness of this news, we find that the comparison has no stark contrast. The writer should elaborate on this part such as: Why is it so special in cooking in a box? Does it make chickens tastier or dose the aroma result from the special cooking method? Besides, some of the sentences need to be revised such as “Some people may well ask what the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens, which are roasted in steel barrels as well, is” which is a little too long and therefore leads to a single word “is” after a comma.
All in all, Alan’s news is pretty good. After reading his story, we all can wait for no time to give it a try!



Chat Transcripts of SL Discussion:

[2009/03/11 7:56] Cloud Clarity: i am th organizer of alan's
[2009/03/11 7:56] karikan Kytori: it's dana's sleep time
[2009/03/11 7:56] karikan Kytori: h aha
[2009/03/11 7:56] Nada Copperfield: muahauhauaha
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: iti s
[2009/03/11 7:57] Cloud Clarity: lol
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: muahaua
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: but it's okay
[2009/03/11 7:57] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 7:57] Cloud Clarity: i'm ok if u don't mind~
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: i can endure it
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: so i am the editor of alns; aritlce
[2009/03/11 7:57] karikan Kytori: ha ha, endure
[2009/03/11 7:57] Nada Copperfield: muahuahauah
[2009/03/11 7:58] Cloud Clarity: dana wants to sing
[2009/03/11 7:58] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 7:58] karikan Kytori: sing for us
[2009/03/11 7:58] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: can you have your link
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: can i have your link
[2009/03/11 7:59] Nada Copperfield: i can not have another clikc another item
[2009/03/11 7:59] karikan Kytori: britbiscuits@blogspot.com
[2009/03/11 7:59] Cloud Clarity: Next Magazine once honored the sandwich of Hong Rui-Zhen Confectionary to be the most delicious in Taiwan. Perhaps you might think it’s a little exaggerated; yet, you still cannot deny the facts that the sandwich is at the top. People from different counties often gather in Ptt Buytogether for ordering the sandwiches.
[2009/03/11 8:00] Cloud Clarity: sory= = \
[2009/03/11 8:00] Cloud Clarity: http://britbiscuits.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: danke
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: i like tyou topic
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:00] karikan Kytori: ok, my story seems to be kinda disorder
[2009/03/11 8:00] Nada Copperfield: it's intriguing
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: coz i just wrote what i thought at the time
[2009/03/11 8:01] Cloud Clarity: can u say the chinese name of ur cusines?
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: fisrt, i mentioned it attracts many people to give it a try
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: no name
[2009/03/11 8:01] karikan Kytori: just 烤雞
[2009/03/11 8:02] karikan Kytori: then i mentioned how it is cooked
[2009/03/11 8:02] karikan Kytori: and its aroma
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: then the difference between 桶子雞 and it
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: whic is good
[2009/03/11 8:03] Cloud Clarity: where?
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: at the end, how to taste it
[2009/03/11 8:03] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: then>
[2009/03/11 8:03] Nada Copperfield: ??
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: the end.......
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: it seems to me abrupt now
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: your picture is really really good
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: since it is really enticing
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: since u do not get its ending
[2009/03/11 8:04] Cloud Clarity: i like ur last para
[2009/03/11 8:04] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:04] Nada Copperfield: and that could arous readers' apetite
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: muahauhaua
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: is it not abrupt?
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: wati
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: not that far yet
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: i kept wondering whether i could end thus
[2009/03/11 8:05] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 8:05] Nada Copperfield: then your organization is also fine
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: i mean good
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/03/11 8:06] karikan Kytori: shall i elaborate some parts more?
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: the ending is good
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: you dont need to change
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: since it is time for the reader to have the chicken
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: then you sould end here
[2009/03/11 8:06] Nada Copperfield: which is also good
[2009/03/11 8:07] karikan Kytori: so it is not abrupt?
[2009/03/11 8:07] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:07] Cloud Clarity: i'm hungry for reading ur news= =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/03/11 8:08] karikan Kytori: ur exaggerating
[2009/03/11 8:08] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/11 8:08] Cloud Clarity: no i am really hungry= =
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: the readers should taste the chicken themselves
[2009/03/11 8:08] Nada Copperfield: muahuaha or i misread it again
[2009/03/11 8:09] karikan Kytori: u mean i should add this?
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: i dunno
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: becaseu
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: your ending is good for me
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: but then the taste would be missing
[2009/03/11 8:09] Cloud Clarity: yeah me too
[2009/03/11 8:09] Cloud Clarity: i like the ending
[2009/03/11 8:09] karikan Kytori: the taste?
[2009/03/11 8:09] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: i don't get it
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: would u explain it?
[2009/03/11 8:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: really ler me want to taste
[2009/03/11 8:10] Jackowacko Juliesse: let*
[2009/03/11 8:10] Nada Copperfield: becasue savor of this chickin is depend on the reader but not the words
[2009/03/11 8:10] Nada Copperfield: well its a little bit hard to explain
[2009/03/11 8:10] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/11 8:11] Nada Copperfield: but i dnot; mean that you have to add the discrption of the taste
[2009/03/11 8:11] Nada Copperfield: again , it depends on waht is your main point
[2009/03/11 8:11] Cloud Clarity: can we go next time lol
[2009/03/11 8:12] Cloud Clarity: Some people may well ask what the difference between these chickens and Tungtzu chickens, which are roasted in steel barrels as well, is. ---> why u have "is " at the end?
[2009/03/11 8:12] Nada Copperfield: if your point is just about entice the reader to have a bit of it then you actually don't have to mention the savor
[2009/03/11 8:12] karikan Kytori: the difference
[2009/03/11 8:12] karikan Kytori: singular
[2009/03/11 8:13] Cloud Clarity: yeah i see that wheich is too long to remeber the previous lines@@
[2009/03/11 8:13] Cloud Clarity: sory
[2009/03/11 8:13] Nada Copperfield: if you just want to entice the readers to have the chickne
[2009/03/11 8:13] Nada Copperfield: then i think the ending is enough
[2009/03/11 8:13] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll revise the sentences
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: but i still don't get nada's comment
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/11 8:14] karikan Kytori: u mean i do not have to compare them?
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: np
[2009/03/11 8:14] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: i thinkg that ur news is mainly about introducing the way of cooking not the flavor
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: just take a look of the pic
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: you can see its delicious
[2009/03/11 8:15] Cloud Clarity: ( my feeling= =)
[2009/03/11 8:15] karikan Kytori: so i do not need to describe its taste? like succulent part?
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: but
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: yeah
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: maybe
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: not
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: you could mention it
[2009/03/11 8:16] Nada Copperfield: that's fine
[2009/03/11 8:16] Jackowacko Juliesse: ur topic is the difference between the way they cooked?
[2009/03/11 8:17] Jackowacko Juliesse: or the flavor between them?
[2009/03/11 8:17] Nada Copperfield: you can focus on the scent then the flavor would be depend on the readers
[2009/03/11 8:17] Nada Copperfield: since the ending is kinda let the reader to taste it tmeselves
[2009/03/11 8:17] karikan Kytori: u mean i just describe how it's served
[2009/03/11 8:18] karikan Kytori: not the taste?
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: no i mean it;s okay not to desvribe the taste that';s fine
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: sicne the readers could taste it themsevles
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: and
[2009/03/11 8:18] Nada Copperfield: which is the dunction of your ending
[2009/03/11 8:18] Cloud Clarity: i reread again, and i find itss ok to add "taste" part if u want
[2009/03/11 8:19] Nada Copperfield: fucntion
[2009/03/11 8:19] Nada Copperfield: then the scent discription might arouse our evoke the readers or entice the readers to taste them tmeselves
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: but if u don't, i also feel its ok cuz the overall news is about the way it served
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: we have less than ten mins
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: i think you article is no problem
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahuah
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: i think the taste part is the difference, so i wrote it
[2009/03/11 8:20] Cloud Clarity: perhaps we should try to make a conclusion?
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: never think of taste and serving way
[2009/03/11 8:20] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:20] Nada Copperfield: muahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:21] karikan Kytori: olivia, u mean at the end?
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 8:22] Cloud Clarity: ok just forget about it, i just mean that either u add taste or not is ok
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: the scent
[2009/03/11 8:22] Nada Copperfield: the scent is what you can focus on
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: then that would entice the readers to taste the chicken
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: u mean the wooden scent or the hakka part?
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: or more about the scent?
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: the chicken scent
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: muahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: other scents?
[2009/03/11 8:23] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: the chicken scent
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: what other scents
[2009/03/11 8:23] Nada Copperfield: spirit's scetns????
[2009/03/11 8:24] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll try to conjure up a possible description about that
[2009/03/11 8:24] Cloud Clarity: hey~do u mention why it is cooked in the box?
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: why it's cooked in the box?
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: but that's just a way to cook
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: since u do not use an electric oven
[2009/03/11 8:25] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: oh
[2009/03/11 8:25] Nada Copperfield: no big problem actually
[2009/03/11 8:25] karikan Kytori: i know ur meaning
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: but the fucntion of the box
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: but i do not know how to say that in eng
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: 要"悶"
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuahuahua
[2009/03/11 8:26] Cloud Clarity: ohohohohoh
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: but i do not know the word for it
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: or make the scent more enticing?????
[2009/03/11 8:26] Una Rewell is Online
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: more thick
[2009/03/11 8:26] Nada Copperfield: Hey!
[2009/03/11 8:26] karikan Kytori: thanks
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: i'll add that part'
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: we are done
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: right?????
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: btw i like your picture
[2009/03/11 8:27] Cloud Clarity: cuz the airtight space preserved the aroma
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: it's really goooooooood
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: done sounds like we r in trouble
[2009/03/11 8:27] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:27] Nada Copperfield: muahuahuah
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: it''s pun
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 8:28] karikan Kytori: no other opinion?
[2009/03/11 8:28] Cloud Clarity: or cuz the airtight space make it possible to eat( 才會熟)
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: then she else?
[2009/03/11 8:28] Nada Copperfield: sth
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: no i guss
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: i think it makes chickens 熟透 and 增加香氣 at the same time
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: u cna try to decribe that if u want to say sth more abnout the box's function
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: so...
[2009/03/11 8:29] Cloud Clarity: done?
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: ok, i'll try to look for "悶" in eng
[2009/03/11 8:29] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 8:30] karikan Kytori: ok, thx